Not feeling this one nearly as much. I think the mix doesn't really favour the thick guitar tones, and the vocals are inconsistent to the moon and back. With that being said, it's still good.
Not feeling this one nearly as much. I think the mix doesn't really favour the thick guitar tones, and the vocals are inconsistent to the moon and back. With that being said, it's still good.
It’s multiple vocalists
Sounds quite nice, perhaps a little bit on the short side, the track I feel could develop a lot more from this, and I feel like the potential was squandered a little bit. However, what is here sounds very nice, and I think this is quite the good direction to go in, if I do say so myself.
I really appreciate that you liked it, I will try to do something better in the next song ^^
The melody is a bit weird...
which one?
Nice song, albeit, the melodies are sometimes a bit jarring
always appreciate constructive feedback like this, thank you!
Very bare and skeletal, but nice melody.
Yea kinda what i went for thx
I have no words.
Thank you so much!<3
Everything sounded nice until 2:08 with this very weird and just flat out awful and unfitting melody. 4/10
while I don't really see what you're saying, I don't like this song myself, worst on the album for sure. but if you liked the rest of this one, you'll probably like any of my other stuff a lot more.
Sounds very metal. But the choir doesn't really fit.
I specifically added in low male-sections for the first 80 seconds of the track, as the design aim for that entire section was a nod towards the Sci-Fi side of the Martial Industrial genre which I wanted to emulated before the track shifted into a Metal piece (such as Legionarii's I.R.O.N project). Low-Male choirs accompanied by a mixture of percussion (either large frame-drums, metal clangs, and/or marching band snares) are a common design combo which I've always enjoyed and I personally feel do work in that context.
Thanks for checking the track out!
The lack of good harmony towards the end kinda throws me off a bit.
harmony is never necessary but a good touch. sometimes you want to hammer in a certain melody without interruptions
:p
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