The melody is a bit weird...
The melody is a bit weird...
which one?
Nice song, albeit, the melodies are sometimes a bit jarring
always appreciate constructive feedback like this, thank you!
Very bare and skeletal, but nice melody.
Yea kinda what i went for thx
I have no words.
Thank you so much!<3
Everything sounded nice until 2:08 with this very weird and just flat out awful and unfitting melody. 4/10
while I don't really see what you're saying, I don't like this song myself, worst on the album for sure. but if you liked the rest of this one, you'll probably like any of my other stuff a lot more.
Sounds very metal. But the choir doesn't really fit.
I specifically added in low male-sections for the first 80 seconds of the track, as the design aim for that entire section was a nod towards the Sci-Fi side of the Martial Industrial genre which I wanted to emulated before the track shifted into a Metal piece (such as Legionarii's I.R.O.N project). Low-Male choirs accompanied by a mixture of percussion (either large frame-drums, metal clangs, and/or marching band snares) are a common design combo which I've always enjoyed and I personally feel do work in that context.
Thanks for checking the track out!
The lack of good harmony towards the end kinda throws me off a bit.
harmony is never necessary but a good touch. sometimes you want to hammer in a certain melody without interruptions
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